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First attempt at a rendering!

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MysteriousGT1   +1y
well redid the caddy STS and figured I would try a background for it...its my first attempt so be easy on me

need feedback on what i need to change or improve!

thanks

CHOSN1   +1y
i personally would like to see a front view also and not 2 rear views. For a first time though, I'd say pretty good.
Shaven   +1y
nice but to have balance dont put both the front image and the backdrop face the same flip the back or the front.
eyekandydesigns   +1y
Your almost there...your brush work is definitly awesome, but I think (don't take this wrong or harsh but more as input to make it better) there are a couple of things that just don't look right to me before you even get to the back ground and that is the front bumper color is off and something that doesn't have to do with your photoshop skills but you need to watch out what kinda wheels you put on things cause you are showing 8 lugs and I doubt that anyone would really do that with a truck conversion like this. Also you have a bend (body feature) in the tailgate and I would like to see that transfer into the rear bumper cause right now it just looks off. Also make your windows see through to the background, not completely but to whatever your tint is set at. Plus you have some kinda visible light coming from the bottom hole in the rims but you wouldn't see that cause the truck is laid out. As far as the background use it to highlight unique features if you want to enlarge it. As far as backgrounds though they are always harder for me when it is just a solid color car cause there is just not enough contrast between the two. Just my two cents though...and like I said it is definitly nice though...I just think you need a little more time on the detailing...oh ya a steering wheel too.
-rj
MysteriousGT1   +1y
thanks for the replies...i did not notice the light behind the rims...and i always look for that but it seemed to slip through the cracks in this one

i also see what your saying about the background image being flipped to face the opposite way didn't think about that one!

ill keep all that in mind for my next rendering i make up...thanks for the input guys, as always it helps me out alot!
eyekandydesigns   +1y
anytime...and if you ever want a second view on something you are doing I am more then willing to look it over for you and give you some of my input.
-rj
Shaven   +1y
4 real Rj is the B Mizzel on noticing small things.
MysteriousGT1   +1y
accually i might take you up on that im working on a full render of a new Lexus IS with a kit right now...need input on if it flows with the car or not!...how do you PM on here?

thanks guys!
eyekandydesigns   +1y
just shoot me an email:
rj@eyekandydesigns.com
-rj
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