my recent rendering.. need some input.

heres my recent rendering give me your opinions and anything that could help me improve myself... thanks!!!


myspace.com/surealcorp

your logo could use some improvement

Your reflection is a little funky. I agree with robbie on the logo its very hard to read. The paint looks over saturated.

Other than that its not bad from that I can see at this size.

I think that reflection on floor feels off, maybe if ya faded the edges it coem off a little better ...

over all it's a kool truck, nice idea

i can do any kinda photoshop stuff but ima agree with Robbie cuz i cant even read ur logo.

cool thanks for the comments im definitely gonna work on all that. i started really working on renderings a few months ago and since then i decided to go to school for graphic designs since i cant get a job as a bodyman or painter anywhere right now. lol so ill definitely be posting up stuff as i go to school.

its graphic design, not designs. you'll prolly learn that in school too lol

the reflection on the windsheild of a tree should get removed, it takes away from the environment that you have the truck siting in,.

what program are you usin?

the black background takes away from the rendering.. make the front view take up more of the rendering and be the main focus.. use lighter colors for backgrounds until you have a good sense of layout and things will fall into place with time